2008年郴州市中考英语标杆作文
（一）
I have just heard the latest
news about your hometown,Wenchuan,in Sichuan Province.There happened a big
earthquake.I’m very sorry to know that you
have lost your parents.Even worse,I know you have been hurt badly.I also know
about your moods now.It’s normal to feel sad
when you have lost someone who is important to you.But your parents would not
want you to be unhappy all the time.So you should work hard and make a
contribution to rebuilding your hometown.Come on!My dear friend.Nothing can
defeat a person who never gives up.
第五档15分
包括全部要点，语言规范，并使用了较多的语言成分，行文连贯，表达清楚准确。
（二）
I knowed there was a large
earthquakein Wenchuang Sichuang on March twelveth afternoon.I am surprised and
afread of you.I am sorry to hear that your parents was died and you were
hurted.When the earthquake happened,many houses fall down and many people lose
them’s life.So many people feel sad.Your hometown will
be rebuild.And I will raise money to help you.You should brave.
第四档11分
包含了全部要点，但有明显的四处左右的语言错误：
第1行：knowed
第3行：was died
第4行：lose them’s
life
第5行：will be
rebuild should brave
行文基本连贯，意思表达清楚。
（三）
I heard of your hometown Sichuan
happen earthquake.your parents was died.you house was fall down and you
hurt.Don’t worry.It will better,if you
will have something probem,you speak to me,I will try to my best to help you,my
phone humber is 2150432 I live in Chenzhou.
第三档8分
缺要点一<表达作者悲伤的心情>语言错误较多：
第1行：heard of
happen
第2行：was
died,was fall down,you hurt
第3行：will better
have something probem
第4行：try to my
best
但还是基本表达了意思。
（四）
I am Li Hua.fivetury 12 day 2008
year.p·m2:28,Wenchuan take 8.0 earthquake.homes fall down.we 可以 rebuild.lose my’s life.I think you
can star.raise money we give your.can I help me?My telephone number is
5368261.Bye-bye.
第二档5分
信息采集不完整，要点不明确，语言错误多，并影响了意思的表达，并且使用了“中文”和逻辑性错误。
（五）
Earthquake;rebuild;fall
doun.lsoe one’s life;be/feel sad;raise
money.This is Lin Hua.when will he be back?sorry,I don’t
know.He didn’t thell me.Could you please,take
a message?
第一档2分
只是抄写了一些提示词，不成句子，未能表达文章的意思。
